I find that the text doesn't stand out enough. Maybe bold or outline the text. Eitehr that or pick a different font.Overall though, I like it. I wish there wasn't as much shake but I can live with it. I also wish the signs were clearly but I can also live with that.
Kasey might have a point about the text ... 'Fucking Canada.' I love it ...I like the shake, the hand-held, the DIY ethic ... reflects the milieu, m'lud. Music is pretty funky too.
Thanks guys, good point about the text.The next pass will be a little tighter and easier to read.
John-When are you going to put this on crimespot? I have a bad memory and forget to check on you from time to time.
I have to agree with Dec about the great last line and the great music.
I find that the text doesn't stand out enough. Maybe bold or outline the text. Eitehr that or pick a different font.
ReplyDeleteOverall though, I like it. I wish there wasn't as much shake but I can live with it. I also wish the signs were clearly but I can also live with that.
Kasey might have a point about the text ...
ReplyDelete'Fucking Canada.' I love it ...
I like the shake, the hand-held, the DIY ethic ... reflects the milieu, m'lud.
Music is pretty funky too.
Thanks guys, good point about the text.
ReplyDeleteThe next pass will be a little tighter and easier to read.
John-When are you going to put this on crimespot? I have a bad memory and forget to check on you from time to time.
ReplyDeleteI have to agree with Dec about the great last line and the great music.
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