Tuesday, January 06, 2009

Book Trailer

So, I'm kicking around ideas for a book trailer. This is what I've got so far:


video


Opinions? Suggestions? Anything?

5 comments:

Kasey D. said...

I find that the text doesn't stand out enough. Maybe bold or outline the text. Eitehr that or pick a different font.

Overall though, I like it. I wish there wasn't as much shake but I can live with it. I also wish the signs were clearly but I can also live with that.

Declan Burke said...

Kasey might have a point about the text ...

'Fucking Canada.' I love it ...

I like the shake, the hand-held, the DIY ethic ... reflects the milieu, m'lud.

Music is pretty funky too.

John McFetridge said...

Thanks guys, good point about the text.

The next pass will be a little tighter and easier to read.

pattinase (abbott) said...

John-When are you going to put this on crimespot? I have a bad memory and forget to check on you from time to time.

Kasey D. said...

I have to agree with Dec about the great last line and the great music.